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On a Pale Horse (Incarnations of Immortality Book 1) Kindle Edition
Shooting Death was a mistake, as Zane soon discovered. For the man who killed the Incarnation of Death was immediately forced to assume the vacant position! Thereafter, he must speed over the world, riding his pale horse, and ending the lives of others.
Zane was forced to accept his unwelcome task, despite the rules that seemed woefully unfair. But then he found himself being drawn into an evil plot of Satan. Already the prince of Evil was forging a trap in which Zane must act to destroy Luna, the woman he loved.
He could see only one possible way to defeat the Father of Lies. It was unthinkable—but he had no other solution!
- LanguageEnglish
- PublisherDel Rey
- Publication dateFebruary 14, 2012
- File size2.4 MB
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Zane shook his head, experiencing a chill. “I don’t want that one!”
The man smiled, an obviously perfunctory and practiced expression reserved for wavering marks. He was well dressed, but somewhat sallow, in the manner of those who remained in the shade too long. “You misunderstand, sir. This fine gem does not bring you death. It does the opposite.”
Zane was hardly reassured. “Then why call it—?”
“The Deathstone.” Again that annoyingly patronizing shaping of the face, as the proprietor eased the ignorant concern of the balky customer. “It merely advises the wearer of the proximity of termination, by darkening. The speed and intensity of the change notifies you of the potential circumstance of your demise—in plenty of time for you to avoid it.”
“But isn’t that paradox?” Zane had seen such stones advertised, usually at prohibitive prices, but discounted the claims as marketing hyperbole. “A prophecy isn’t valid, if—”
“No paradox,” the proprietor said with professional certainty. “Merely adequate warning. You could hardly obtain a better service, sir. After all, what is more precious than life?”
“That presumes a person’s life is worth living,” Zane said sourly. He was a young man of no particular stature or distinction of feature, with acne scars that neither medication nor spot-spell had been able to eradicate entirely. His hair was dishwater brown and somewhat unkempt, and his teeth were unfashionably irregular. He was obviously a depressive type. “So it darkens, and you change your course, and you don’t die. You figure the warning saved you. But it could be a random turning of the stone. Color-spells are a dime a dozen. No way to prove the prophecy was valid. On the other hand, if it fails to darken, and you die, how can you complain? You’ll be dead!” He scratched distractedly at a scar. “If it’s wrong, how do you get a refund?”
“You don’t believe?” the proprietor asked, frowning expertly. Apart from his complexion, he was a moderately handsome man of early middle age whose hair was enchanted to carry a permanent chestnut wave. “I run a respectable shop. I assure you, all my spell stones are genuine.”
“According to the Apocalypse, Death rides a pale horse,” Zane said, warming to his melancholy. He evidently had some education in this area. “I question whether an inanimate object, a chunk of colored corundum, can stay that dread horseman so simply. Given the uncertainties of the situation, such a stone is of no practical use to the owner. He can only test it by seeing it turn, then refusing to change his course. If it is a valid prophecy, he is doomed. If it is not, he has been cheated. It’s a no-win game. I have played enough of that type.”
“I will provide you a demonstration,” the proprietor said, perceiving a morbid streak that could make this customer vulnerable to an aggressive and properly slanted sales pitch. “Skepticism is healthy, sir, and you are obviously too intelligent to be deceived by defective merchandise. The value of the stone can be proved.”
Zane shrugged, affecting indifference. “A free demonstration? Can it be worth more than I pay for it?”
The proprietor smiled more genuinely, knowing that his fish, despite evasive maneuverings, was halfway hooked. Truly uninterested persons did not linger to argue cases. He took the stone from the magically theft-proofed glass display case and proffered it.
Zane smiled quirkily and accepted the ring, putting it on the tip of his thumb. “Unless there’s some immediate and obvious threat for the stone to point out—”
Then he was silent, for already the ring was turning. The bright red deepened to dark red, and then to opaque.
Zane’s mind began to numb around the edges. Death—he had a deep guilt there. He looked at his left arm, feeling a spot of blood burning into the skin. He pictured the face of his mother as she died. How could he ever exonerate that memory?
“Death—within hours, suddenly!” the proprietor said, aghast. “The stone is absolutely black! I’ve never seen it turn so fast!”
Zane shook off his private specter. No, he could not afford to believe in this! “If I am to die within hours, I’ll have no need of this stone.”
“But you do need it, sir!” the proprietor insisted. “With the Deathstone you can change your fate. Hold it and decide on a new course, and if the color returns, you know it’s right. You can save your life! But you have to have this fine magical ruby to guide you. To steer you away from death. Otherwise you will surely perish before the day is out. That warning is emphatic!”
Zane hesitated. The Deathstone was an impressive item now. It had, as it were, not minced words. But he had been thinking about death while holding the stone, and that could have made the color turn. Emotion-indicator spells were simple and cheap, hardly deserving the name of magic. There could be many things like that to give false readings. Still—
“How much?” he asked
“How much is life worth?” the propietor asked in return, with a certain predatory gleam in his eyes.
“About two cents, if this stone is right,” Zane said grimly. Yet his heart was beating with nervous power.
“Two cents—per minute,” the proprietor said, going into the closing spiel. “But this phenomenal and beautiful stone is available presently at a discount of fifty percent. I will sell it to you for a mere one cent per minute, including principal, interest, servicing, insurance—”
“How much per month?” Zane demanded, seeing himself getting reeled in.
The proprietor brought out a pocket calculator and punched buttons dexterously. “Four hundred and thirty-two dollars.”
Zane stiffened. He had anticipated a high price, but this was impossible. A family could buy a good house for a similar figure!
“How long?”
“Only fifteen years or less.”
“Or less?”
“In case the gem should miscarry, the insurance will pay off the balance owing, of course.”
“Of course,” Zane agreed with a wry quirk of his mouth. A miscarriage meant death, which meant a bum enchantment. They planned to collect their money regardless of the effectiveness of the Deathstone in protecting its owner. He performed a quick mental calculation and concluded he was being charged a little over seventy-five thousand in total. About two-thirds of that would be interest and other peripherals; still, it was a lot of money. A great lot! More, probably, than his life was worth. Literally.
“He handed back the ruby. Its color returned rapidly as the proprietor took it. In moments its special, deep shade of red glowed beautifully in the lighting of the shop. A ruby was indeed a lovely gemstone, even when it wasn’t magic.
“What else?” Zane asked. He was shaken, but still wanted to find something that would help him.
“Love,” the proprietor said immediately, bringing out a cloudy blue sapphire mounted on another gold ring.
Zane looked at the stone. “Love, as in romance? A woman? Marriage?”
“Or whatever.” The proprietor’s smile was not quite as warm as it had been, perhaps because of the misstep on the prior stone. He did not enjoy seeing fish slip the hook. This gem was probably less expensive, meaning a smaller profit. “This fine stone brightens at the prospect of romance of any kind. Sapphire, as you know, is chemically the same stone as ruby; both are corundum, but because the colors of sapphire are not as rare as those of ruby, the value is less. This is therefore a bargain. It will tune in to your romance; all you have to do is follow its signal until you score.”
“Zane remained skeptical. “You can’t find romance by zeroing in as if it’s a target! There are social aspects, complex nuances of compatibility—”
“The Lovestone takes account of all that, sir. It orients on the right one, taking all factors into consideration. Left to your own devices, you are very likely to make a mistake, and suffer an unfortunate liaison, perhaps one that will become a grief to you. With this stone, that will never happen.”
“But there could be many excellent combinations,” Zane protested. “Many right women. How can a mere gem select among them?”
“Circumstances alter cases, sir. Some women are ideal for any man, with qualities of beauty, talent, and loyalty that make them highly desirable regardless of the variations in the males. But most of them are already married, as these qualities are readily perceived by the boy next door, lucky fellow. Others may be destined for some devaluing development, like a disfiguring illness or serious problems among their relatives. The Lovestone knows; it orients on the most suitable, most reliable, most available individual. It is unerring. Simply turn it to obtain the brightest glow and follow where it leads. You will not be disappointed.” He held forth the blue sapphire. “One demonstration trial, sir.”
“I don’t know. If it’s like the last one—”
“This is romance! How can you lose?”
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- ASIN : B006XWYDXY
- Publisher : Del Rey (February 14, 2012)
- Publication date : February 14, 2012
- Language : English
- File size : 2.4 MB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Print length : 376 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: #74,230 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #677 in Fantasy Adventure Fiction
- #871 in Science Fiction Adventure
- #1,686 in Epic Fantasy (Kindle Store)
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Piers Anthony is one of the world's most popular fantasy authors, and a New York Times bestseller twenty-one times over. His Xanth novels have been read and loved by millions of readers around the world, and he daily receives hundreds of letters from his devoted fans.In addition to the Xanth series, Anthony is the author of many other best-selling works. Piers Anthony lives in Inverness, Florida.
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Customers find this book to be a wonderful read with a compelling story and masterful writing style. The book features a unique world and thought-provoking themes, particularly in its exploration of death and dying. They appreciate the character development, with one customer noting the unexpected hero, and praise the pacing, with one review highlighting how everything wraps together masterfully.
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Customers find the book to be a wonderful and exciting read that they consider a must-read for everyone, with one customer noting it made them reread the series repeatedly.
"...Personally I prefer his series and is more suited for adult fantasy lovers." Read more
"...It makes you think about one's own faith, beliefs, and morality. It is sublime and thought provoking, yet, is easy to understand, and comprehend no..." Read more
"...It's original and well-written, with one of his signature verbose author's notes, which I always loved and have a special resonance now in light of..." Read more
"...I think it’s an excellent read and I hope you will also." Read more
Customers find the story compelling, with one customer noting it's a thought-provoking saga over seven books, while another appreciates how it operates as a Science Fiction story.
"...It is entertaining, witty, yet profound. It makes you think about one's own faith, beliefs, and morality...." Read more
"...It's a fine beginning of a septology that I thoroughly enjoyed (excepting volume 2)...." Read more
"Great story line, I have them all in first addition hardback all from Amazon. Mint condition and came sooner than expected and well practiced." Read more
"...to mind the two volumes following "The Golden Compass": beautiful story turned bitter. One star for sophisticated prose..." Read more
Customers love this book and the entire series, describing it as one of the best fantasy series they've read.
"...is just the first book in a series by Piers Anthony who is well known for his Xanth books...." Read more
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"...To praise this novel, Anthony clearly knows his literature and philosophy; his use of it in versatile feats of imagination automatically propel this..." Read more
"...In my opinion, the perfect opener of the incarnation series." Read more
Customers love the ideas generated in this book, finding it supremely imaginative and thought-provoking, with one customer particularly appreciating the blend of magic and science.
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"...I can tell you that it's a gem and a very valuable one as opposed to the cheap ones from North Carolina the note mentions...." Read more
"...What started as an engaging and creative fantasy devolved onto a series of philosophical opinions, ones which I do not entirely prescribe to...." Read more
"...knows his literature and philosophy; his use of it in versatile feats of imagination automatically propel this book past other "apocalyptic,"..." Read more
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"...Anthony does an excellent job of describing the mechanisms and paraphernalia that are part of Death's job, especially Death's horse, who is a..." Read more
"...I liked his very human characterization of Death. I liked that Death made mistakes, very funny mistakes sometimes...." Read more
Customers appreciate the character development in the book, with one customer noting how the roles were personalized and another highlighting the unexpected hero.
"...the concept that the incarnations began as human and personalized the roles they played, so this Death could be empathic with the people he was..." Read more
"...I never imagined could exist, and has introduced me to beautifully detailed characters that I've simply fallen for...." Read more
"...neglected plotline, character growth, character relatability, character VARIATION, and indeed every other part of this life that draws us to stories...." Read more
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Customers appreciate the pacing of the book, with one customer noting how everything wraps together masterfully.
"...This is a fun conceit, and well-handled by Anthony. It was especially enjoyable when I first read it as a 13-year-old in the mid-80s...." Read more
"...Mint condition and came sooner than expected and well practiced." Read more
"...But still, it pulls together nicely, and if I'm ever at a loss for something to read, I'll get the second book in the series, which I rarely do." Read more
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- Reviewed in the United States on December 24, 2024This is just the first book in a series by Piers Anthony who is well known for his Xanth books. Personally I prefer his series and is more suited for adult fantasy lovers.
- Reviewed in the United States on September 19, 2022I've read this series when it was first published. It is entertaining, witty, yet profound. It makes you think about one's own faith, beliefs, and morality. It is sublime and thought provoking, yet, is easy to understand, and comprehend no matter what age the reader is. My kids read this series when they were tweens, and grasped the author's meaning for each book. Even ow that I'm a grandfather, I can still enjoy these books. They are timeless, and it allows the reader to discover who their own character is within themselves. While also expanding their understanding of other's beliefs while the author takes them on one great adventure after another. I highly recommend this series to everyone who enjoys great fiction based on reality.
- Reviewed in the United States on January 6, 2016As Piers Anthony is one of my favorite authors from my formative years, and as Amazon does not allow half-stars, I'm being generous by rounding up this 3.5-star book to 4 stars.
Overall, this is a fun exploration of an alternate Earth where magic and science coexist in equal parts. One of the side effects of the magic is the existence of the incarnations of Death, Time, Fate, War, Nature, Good, and Evil, each of which are offices held by a succession of previously mortal folks.
This is a fun conceit, and well-handled by Anthony. It was especially enjoyable when I first read it as a 13-year-old in the mid-80s. Zane, the new officeholder of Death, is a likable sort, if not particularly bright, and the book follows him as he encounters the other incarnations and ultimately foils Satan's nefarious plans.
The book isn't without its flaws. Dialogue is clunky. Anthony's well-known propensity to focus on female physiques is abundant (and was likely a selling point at 13). The odd matchsticks metaphor repeatedly revisited doesn't compute.
That said, it's a good example of what would now likely be cataloged as YA fantasy. It's a fine beginning of a septology that I thoroughly enjoyed (excepting volume 2). It's original and well-written, with one of his signature verbose author's notes, which I always loved and have a special resonance now in light of the This American Life episode that featured what an avid fan did with the information included in them.
- Reviewed in the United States on June 5, 2024This is my favorite book and the introductory novel in the Incarnations of Immortality series. I think it’s an excellent read and I hope you will also.
- Reviewed in the United States on June 17, 2020It's the extreme, it's the alluring, it's the sine qua non of life, isn't it?
If graveyards, sickness and old age don't scare you, and assuming you are old and experienced enough, why would they, you must read the Author's Note at the end -- after you finish this book, before you even start reading it, or somewhere in the middle.
My experience is the middle option. I am saving this book for a tasty vacation. But, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed the note at the end. Who can tell what made me start there? But, having finished reading it in one breath -- ok, who is scared of an hyperbole? -- I can tell you that it's a gem and a very valuable one as opposed to the cheap ones from North Carolina the note mentions.
If you want to write a book, any book, even a PhD thesis, the note tells you the one thing you must do. All other paths are to be entered at your financial and emotional peril.
Piers also comes clean on his year of personal problems. Having read many of his books, Xanth and especially my favorite GeoOdyssey, I would put him up with the most transparent of authors. Hermann Hesse anyone? All of his demons as well as better angels are out of the deepest recesses of his soul.
I posit that's the main reason I come back to books written by Piers as well as any other author worth their pen, or keyboard, or speech dictation tool.
It's like I am reading a treatise of my own psyche, the universal one that connects us all, as Jung pointed out with his phrase: the collective (kind of) unconscious. It's coming out. Let it. That's how we will come out of this black or white, racist, worse, discriminatory nightmare where we project out of our minds all that we don't understand and therefore we hate, and can't help but see it in others. We blame instead of feel obviously guilty.
There is another, a better way: know that we all do wrong when we don't know any better. It is time, now, we get to know ourselves and move towards more understanding and acceptance, let alone tolerance.
- Reviewed in the United States on March 1, 2024Great story line, I have them all in first addition hardback all from Amazon. Mint condition and came sooner than expected and well practiced.
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門上 望Reviewed in Japan on August 12, 2013
4.0 out of 5 stars 保存状態良し!
アメリカのペーパーバックの中古なので期待していなかったが、焼け、シミなどほとんどなく、本の背中も割れていなかった。保存状態極めて良好でした。
- Sen7Reviewed in the United Kingdom on April 15, 2020
5.0 out of 5 stars And I looked, and behold, a pale horse! And its rider's name was Death
Reminds me a lot of Discworld and the way that the late great Sir Terry Pratchett related to Death.
This is probably the greatest black comedy novel ever written about the Grim Reaper, it is a lot of fun which is also just as intelligent, if you love mythology, philosophy, psychology, or are just a free spirit by nature with an open mind and an open heart then you will understand a lot of the hidden meanings contained within Piers Anthony's stories. I have bought many books about the Grim Reaper and this was the best.
If you love Terry Pratchett's Discworld series especially Mort, Reaper Man, Soul Music then you will love Piers Anthony and On A Pale Horse.
- Paul D GemmellReviewed in Canada on December 19, 2024
5.0 out of 5 stars one of my favourite Piers Anthony series'
This series and the "Adept" series are my favs from this author. I have read and reread them through my life, which pretty much follows the decades that they author has been producing books. I started as a teen in the 80s. Besides the entertaining and ease of reading, I felt it had a positive influence on my life since teen years and has helped guide my value system, at least insofar as it has made me think about things in life critically from a fun platform. Alas, I have tried to get my son into this author but he is more into Anime.
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flochillerReviewed in Germany on December 18, 2015
5.0 out of 5 stars Sehr spannendes Buch und gut geschrieben
Ich habe bereits zum zweiten Mal On a Pale Horse gelesen und finde es einfach genial! Bis auf Time gefällt mir die ganze Serie wirklich gut
- D. JardelReviewed in France on February 4, 2020
5.0 out of 5 stars I saw an ad for burial plots, and thought to myself this is the last thing I need.
Puns, death, titillation... it’s all here. It’s been over 30 years since I last read this book. I thought I’d re-read it and it holds up after all these years. I’d forgotten how insightful Anthony could be concerning life and death, time and fate, good and evil. The Kindle version isn’t as bad as I thought it would be. I saw few if any spelling or punctuation errors. I’ve decided to re-read the other novels in the series as well.